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Witch Bottle


To lift that bottle now,
hearing the pins and bent nails
rattle in their bitter wash,
is to shake his hand
come out at last from under
what held him –

to feel his measure of that
nearby something
at work between trips
to the butcher and the bank

as it wore his tongue
rough with accounting
broken panes of glass,
absent things, the gate
hanging not as he left it.

Its weight commends him
on the defense he buried
in keeping with tradition, perhaps
beneath his hearth a while,
then beside his door
instead, hidden and unbroken –

that bulb of earth filled
heavy as salt with mean
things – waste, nails, glass,
clippings of what used to grow
and what would grow back –

putting his whole life in,
tipping it upside-down,
to prick his unrest with what
lasts longest after all –

some fingernails, a knot of hair,
a strip of leather
cut to the shape of a heart.
©2009 *b1gfan
:iconb1gfan:

Author's Comments

I first ran across this story via the the preview image I've posted for this piece (which I saw here [link] at The Celler Image of the Day)

It's a hard image not to take an interest in, so I decided to read a bit about it. I looked at this article: 'Witch Bottle' Containing Finger Nails, Hair and Pins Discovered

Around 200 witch bottles have been found in the past but this is thought to be the first time one with its contents intact has been discovered.

Scientists have analysed the contents of the former wine jug after it was discovered by builders redeveloping a site in Greenwich, south east London.

They found it contained a number of pins, finger nails and hair as well as a liquid – discovered to be urine.

Burial of vessels holding personal items, typically from someone suffering an illness and believing themselves persecuted by a witch, was a common practice in the 17th century.

The belief was that the act would reflect the spell back at the witch who would then be forced to relinquish it. The pins and nails were thought to act like pins in voodoo dolls.

Analysis of the contents showed the patient was a smoker and probably quite wealthy judging by the length of the finger nails, the researchers told British Archaeology.
(which you can peep here [link] )

That frankly was not enough for me though so I read on:
London's Magical History Uncorked from 'Witch Bottle'

A rare insight into the folk beliefs of 17th-century Britons has been gleaned from the analysis of a sealed "witch bottle" unearthed in Greenwich, London, in 2004.

Witch bottles were commonly buried to ward off spells during the late 16th and 17th centuries, but it is very rare to find one still sealed.

"So many have been dug up and their contents washed away down the sink," says Alan Massey, a retired chemist formerly at the University of Loughborough, UK, who has examined so-called "magical" artifacts and was asked to analyse the contents of the bottle. "This is the first one that has been opened scientifically."

During the 17th century, British people often blamed witches for any ill health or misfortune they suffered, says Massey. "The idea of the witch bottle was to throw the spell back on the witch," he says. "The urine and the bulb of the bottle represented the waterworks of the witch, and the theory was that the nails and the bent pins would aggravate the witch when she passed water and torment her so badly that she would take the spell back off you."

(You can read the rest here: [link];print=true)

I think I might have more to say later and some changes perhaps, but I gotta go for now so it'll have to wait - it's time to take a trip :)

7/1
I tweeked a little of this and that last night, after getting back from 8 days in Orlando. Sorry for not getting back to everyone quicker on the comments and everything, :) but I'll catch up in the next couple of days now that I'm all unpacked and everything. :peace:

Dave Prisk

Oct 31 - A big :hug: to :iconprofessor-kirby: for tossing this one in the pillowcase along with the rest of the candy she shared in her Halloween feature for 2009. What a darling; what a dear. :heart:

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Given 2009-09-27

Witch Bottle: according to the suggester, "*b1gfan has managed to get inside the mind of a human being from hundreds of years before him, and done so fantastically well. Read the first stanza and you'll be sold." (Suggested by ~ashellessmind and Featured by ^fllnthblnk)

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:iconsober-irish-guy:
I recently heard about these, because someone found one and didn't know what it was. Strange all the customs people forget about. I heard horrible stories about how difficult it is to build a wall in the farmland of Ireland. There's so many little rituals to attend to.
:iconseekingmysoul:
Wonderful reading and so filled with insight into another time and its mentality and inner struggle. Beautiful expression.

--
Bursting out from the ashes, with wings of flames that fly
I am called the Phoenix...A mythical bird that flies
:icontworoads:
Woah. Must say I have not heard about this...but then again, when you write poetry over things you see in the news, I've rarely heard of them either. ;) Thus, the poetry educates in a few ways. I like the flow of this one...especially, for an unsure reason, this:

To lift that bottle now,
hearing the pins and bent nails
rattle in their bitter wash,
is to shake his hand

I like that last line, but of course you have to have the rest with it. Bravo!


`n


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i'm a million different people from one day to the next.


:bulletblack:Member of : *The-Labyrinth-Club:bulletblack:
:icondarthmar:
Amazing...an interesting archaeological find as well...

--
There is nothing 'civil' about any war...So why then, do we call it a 'civil' war when a nation turns in on itself?
:iconjude-boi:
Wow, interesting... and kinda gross.

--
If the world were clear, art would not exist.
-Albert Camus

"Did she just call us 'emo'?"

Do anything but let it yield joy. Do anything, but let it yield ecstasy. -Henry Miller
:iconromanysoup:
A mighty entertaining read. =)
I'll think twice now about all the old bottles I find at flea markets.
:iconashellessmind:
I like the content, but the enjambment on this one really throws me off. Why did you enjamb the entire poem so heavily?

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Harmonize your inward and your outward life, and you soul will know no bounds of joy.
:iconashellessmind:
Also, a little nitpick -- On this line:
"to beat that curse with what"
I think you could come up with a much better and more evocative word than "beat."
This poem is impressive. I would love to see you make it forceful.

--
Harmonize your inward and your outward life, and you soul will know no bounds of joy.
:iconpseudometry:
Love how vivid and evocative that opening strophe is, instantly creates a strong vicarious impression of the bottle. The whole piece is powerfully personal and human, I think, like the narrator, you cannot help but feel like you are coming out from under what held with him, to feel the force of his fear and his personhood through his response.

--
'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
:iconnjkay:
Ah I read about that. I thought it was fascinating. This is an excellent poem by the way.

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Hold a book in your hand and you're a pilgrim at the gates of a new city. - Anne Michaels citing a Hebrew saying.

Fear is regularly overrated.

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