Witch Bottle
To lift that bottle now,
hearing the pins and bent nails
rattle in their bitter wash,
is to shake his hand
come out at last from under
what held him
to feel his measure of that
nearby something
at work between trips
to the butcher and the bank
as it wore his tongue
rough with accounting
broken panes of glass,
absent things, the gate
hanging not as he left it.
Its weight commends him
on the defense he buried
in keeping with tradition, perhaps
beneath his hearth a while,
then beside his door
instead, hidden and unbroken
that bulb of earth filled
heavy as salt with mean
things waste, nails, glass,
clippings of what used to grow
and what would grow back
putting his whole life in,
tipping it upside-down,
to prick his unrest with what
lasts longest after all
some fingernails, a knot of hair,
a strip of leather
cut to the shape of a heart.
















Comments
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Bursting out from the ashes, with wings of flames that fly
I am called the Phoenix...A mythical bird that flies
To lift that bottle now,
hearing the pins and bent nails
rattle in their bitter wash,
is to shake his hand
I like that last line, but of course you have to have the rest with it. Bravo!
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i'm a million different people from one day to the next.
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There is nothing 'civil' about any war...So why then, do we call it a 'civil' war when a nation turns in on itself?
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If the world were clear, art would not exist.
-Albert Camus
"Did she just call us 'emo'?"
Do anything but let it yield joy. Do anything, but let it yield ecstasy. -Henry Miller
I'll think twice now about all the old bottles I find at flea markets.
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Harmonize your inward and your outward life, and you soul will know no bounds of joy.
"to beat that curse with what"
I think you could come up with a much better and more evocative word than "beat."
This poem is impressive. I would love to see you make it forceful.
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Harmonize your inward and your outward life, and you soul will know no bounds of joy.
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'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
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Hold a book in your hand and you're a pilgrim at the gates of a new city. - Anne Michaels citing a Hebrew saying.
Fear is regularly overrated.
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