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Winter Haiku WriMo 2009 by *b1gfan:iconb1gfan:





2/1
Moonsliver, mewling at distant stars –
whose cat are you tonight?

2/2
Maple branches worm through morning fog –
without sun, without shadows.

2/3
Chains caroling above empty swings;
my winter blood slows.

2/4
Spider in the bath,
I’m not here to end your lonely day.

2/5
My window locked tight –
in slips the winter moon.

2/6
Lips pressed against air –
this memory of the present.

2/7
Garden stones dark with rain  –
why am I not so quiet?

2/8
Trimming trees –
a poem fills with sawdust.

2/9
Her tail curls above piled leaves –
a question beginning.

2/10
Skirting the morning headlines –
raccoon steps in frost.

2/11
Hail at the window,
knocking, but not to enter.

2/12
Passing a dog lying in the street –
how far away home is.

2/13
A break in the clouds –
branches leap into the sun.

2/14
Where does rain touch down
in such a wind?

2/15
Rain prattles in the drainpipe –
awake at 3:00 a.m.

2/16
Rounding the bend,
rails turn into slanting rain.

2/17
Moon appears between myrtle branches
– I set my pen aside.

2/18
Picking the last onions
from my curry –
still it rains.

2/19
Wings folded against rain,
a hawk perched above passing cars.

2/20
Bare feet press against hardwood –
sudden winter frost.

2/21
Looking for no way around –
nimble wind pushes through
leaves

2/22
Returning to bed –
a wisp of candle smoke.

2/23
I lift my eyes to chapel bells –
one green branch.

2/24
In a puddle of sky –
my rippling smile.

2/25
Finches line a wire –
thin whiskers watching from below.

2/26
Not one leaf on the Magnolia –
but blooms, blooms!

2/27
The edge of color everywhere –
Sunset!

2/28
Little cat, mewling at my window –
whose moon are we tonight?

"The Leftovers"
- Regular as Thursday night pot roast
*
As the bus turns –
shadows pass from sight.

*
Though he waves to my smile,
ours are faces we do not know.

*
Sunlit pillows catch dust
falling golden as light.
©2009 *b1gfan
:iconb1gfan:

Author's Comments

Ah the Winter Haiku WriMo - she is upon us no?

Over 1,200 of these lil hummers will hit the screens here on dA in only about 28 days; amazing ain't it :)

All that's missing now is perhaps you, eh? If you've an interest in what this is all about, or if yer hankerin' to git yerself involved, pop on over to see:iconmsjames: - he'll set ya' right. Then check out the sweet stamp created for the occasion by :iconretrozombie:. You won't be at all sorry; I promise.

Dave Prisk

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Very nice! Good luck with the WriMo! :)
:iconirrevocablefate:
Very lovely dear! :heart:

Good luck! ♥

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:iconb1gfan:
Aww Thank you Stephanie :) The WriMo is always a challenge- the discipline of one work a day, and in a form that is (frankly) not my nest is work indeed.
:iconk-sajid:
Nicely done, I've never read a haiku that asked a question before! Great start my friend, I wish you good luck with the wrimo.

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:iconirrevocablefate:
:hug: You're very welcome dearie! Ah, it is, it is. :hug: Well, I think you did just splendidly at it. <3

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:iconb1gfan:
And I you - I enjoy your first entry!
:iconb1gfan:
:hug: I shall aim for splendid all the time :)
:iconk-sajid:
Thank you =)

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