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The Heart of Her Angel by *b1gfan:iconb1gfan:



The Heart of Her Angel


A woman with connections to Hell’s Angels
stands and stares with her electric eyes,
an angel perhaps,
to bear your soul away.

The pebbles peeling in her heart,
there are whole oceans
full of tears of agony
inside.

The angel’s above look down upon her
with love and hope
while the blue night drops on the world
and the silent Will sets out.

The faceless hoards are dropping dead.
They rise from ashes of the night
to an enchanting philosophy.
©2008-2009 *b1gfan
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Author's Comments

This is actually a poem made from lines swiped from other poems, at least one other author's work is represented in each line. The difference between their work and this effort - they have talent.

Dave Prisk

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:iconblue-roses-to-dust:
beautiful..i enjoyed it ...and the title.. lovely idea

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.. and without you is how i disappear
and live my life alone forever now... (MyChemicalRomance)

.. believe, believe in me, believe ... (SmashingPumpkins)

.. and into skies of enlightened-poets [link]
:iconblueskye27:
"stands and stares with her electric eyes" is probably my favorite line, but it seems a bit too disjointed to me. You still did a great job considering each line is from a different writer. :clap:
:iconsara-bella-snowwhite:
This was beautiful. I really liked the idea of "pebbles peeling in her heart."
:iconb1gfan:
:) Thanks so much :D I'm glad you liked it.
:iconxdemonicallyxyoursx:
The imagery is astounding...

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.homeless.broke.out of luck.really don't give a fuck.
:iconb1gfan:
:hug: thank you very much

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