El Día de los Difuntos
I could say the clouds were silent,
hushed in close against the skirt
of Volcán de Agua. I could say
they had passed over the market
stones without setting a shadow
down among the candied fruits
and marigolds gathered there for this
day of the dead. Focusing like this
how the sky lingers uninterrupting,
as sweet squash and cups of chicha
spill across the square, announcing
the burning I might see two men
there, stripped and beaten by the crowd,
listening to the mouth of a gas can
sing of errors and heavy promises:
never to avoid the rough battles,
ever to defend land and home,
always to burn, to be burning;
and feel the heat of people
pressed against people,
smoke rising on the wind
kite tails climbing
from the graveyard into heaven
on this day of the dying.














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"...You have to set up the right atmosphere for women."-Kagome-
"Atmosphere...as in clouds and stuff??"-Inuyasha-
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I like to read poems aloud, so I appreciate your skill in that sector.
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from the graveyard into heaven
on this day of the dying."
if you wrote that on my headstone, i'd be contented. this is a wonderful piece, so evocative and dramatic and yet also serene and peaceful.
Also a very interesting subject and article. It makes me wonder if what the people there are doing is right or wrong...
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Bursting out from the ashes, with wings of flames that fly
I am called the Phoenix...A mythical bird that flies
stones without setting a shadow
down among the candied fruits
and marigolds gathered there for this
day of the dead. Focusing like this
how the sky lingered uninterupting,
I like those stanzas very very much.
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