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All That's Missing by *b1gfan:iconb1gfan:



All That’s Missing


I would ask her, where is it known
better than in the hollows of dying
cherry trees, what can be as good
as gone – to not have returned to us
too quickly what has been lifted as we
moved lightly through crowds in a park,
as we spoke, distracted by friends?

She might say, what can grow
as sweet on time as things unreturned,
a blue leather wallet, all its photos and I.D.,
twenty-seven years and more gone –
almost never found – and the promise
they hold that you are already waiting
where you’d hoped someday to return?
©2009 *b1gfan
:iconb1gfan:

Author's Comments

It all fits together somehow; I'm sure of it.

TREE'S SWEET 'FRUIT' WALLET SWIPED IN '82
By PHILIP MESSING

It's not quite money growing on trees, but it's awfully close.

A woman whose wallet was swiped in Central Park 27 years ago got a blast from the past when it was discovered last week stuffed inside the hollow of a dying cherry tree.

"I remember it like it was yesterday," said Upper East Side resident Ruth Bendik, 69, referring to Oct. 24, 1982, when her wallet was snatched as she watched the New York City Marathon.

"I was in the park, walking over to greet the runners after they finished, and I was in a crush of people, and all of a sudden, I realized my purse felt very light."

The wallet was found Tuesday by Josh Galiley, 32, a tree-care supervisor for the Central Park Conser vancy, after he took down a dying black cherry tree near Rumsey Playfield at East 72nd Street.

You can read the rest here if you'd like: [link]

For whatever reason, every time I read this article the first thought out of my head is that old wedding day rhyme:
"Something old, something new, something borrowed, something blue." (but that's a different poem)

Dave Prisk

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:icongreymists:
You know, sometimes I'm really surprised that you can take something like this news article and turn it into something amazing. Because if I had read that article I would not be able to make it become beautiful. That is all! :) <3
:iconb1gfan:
:D Thank you my friend - that is very complimentary of you to be sure and I really appreciate it. That you :+fav:ed as well is extra sweetness indeed. Thanks so much :hug:
:icontworoads:
Talk about extremely weird. I agree with the first commenter; you do have a rare skill that most don't. ^^ And it's not just major articles or news headlines such as death and whatnot but something relatively unknown such as this. I get my news through your poetry. :D

My own grandmother lost an onyx ring with a single diamond in the middle out in the yard when she was younger...found it years and years later. How did it survive mowers, etc.? Just weird. ^^

`n


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i'm a million different people from one day to the next.


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:iconpseudometry:
I absolutely agree with the above comment-- your piece is like elegant origami out of scrap paper.

where is it known
better than in the hollows of dying
cherry trees, what can be as good
as gone

What a beautiful way to couch your concept. And it seems so strangely true of life, that such odd almost arbitrary things as lost wallets in dying cherry trees could hold be taken to hold so much meaning, could symbolise such human hopings for unlikely, almost forgotten things.

--
'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
:iconpseudometry:
*I should clarify, when I referred to agreeing with the above comment, I had ~greymists's comment in mind specifically.

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'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
:iconstarfire20:
I really like this a lot!! Great job. I love where your inspiration comes from...always sooo original, love love love it!!! You are great =)

--
-"I'll tell you," she said in the same huried passionate wisper, "What real love is. It is blind devotion, unquestioning self-humiliation, utter submission, trust and belife aginst yourself and aginst the whole world, giveing up your hole heart and soul
:iconnjkay:
Awesome poem! That is such a cool story.

--
Hold a book in your hand and you're a pilgrim at the gates of a new city. - Anne Michaels citing a Hebrew saying.

Fear is regularly overrated.

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